🔄 Upgrading your existing copy

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Upgrading your existing copy

Complete the following fields:

  • Make this text more persuasive: [copy and paste the text]
  • Make this text connect more with the reader: [copy and paste the text]
  • Rewrite this text delving into the pain points and desires of a potential client: [copy and paste the text]
  • Rewrite this text using the AIDA copywriting formula: [copy and paste the text]
  • Rewrite this text using the PAS copywriting formula: [copy and paste the text]

Indications Open questions:

  • “Can you give me some tips to make my copy more engaging and persuasive?”
  • “How can I improve my headlines to make them more eye-catching?”
  • “Can you help me simplify my writing and make it more accessible to my target audience?”
  • “What are some common mistakes to avoid in my advertising writing?”
  • “Can you suggest some tools or resources I can use to improve my copywriting skills?”
  • “How can I use storytelling techniques to make my copy more memorable?”
  • “Can you provide me with feedback on a specific piece of copy I’ve written and suggest ways to improve it?”
  • “How can I use data and research to make my copy more effective?”
  • “Can you help me create a clear and compelling call to action in my copy?”
  • “How can I improve my writing style to make it more engaging and unique?”

 

Example:

PROMPT:

Make this text more persuasive: 'Stay Charged Up For Any Adventure With Solar PowerAs our first watch to offer solar charging, fēnix 6X Pro Solar puts no limits on how far you can go. Its 1.4” Power Glass™ lens uses sunlight to extend battery life for off-grid adventures.Sunlight gives your watch a free energy boost, extending time between chargesDynamic PacePro™ feature helps you run smarter over various types of terrainPreloaded ski maps cover more than 2,000 resorts around the worldPower manager feature shows how adjusting settings can extend battery lifeWrist-based heart rate¹ and Pulse Ox² sensors add insight to your fitness activitiesSync your favorite streaming services, and listen to music without your phoneQuality by Design: Rugged yet sophisticated design features a 1.4” solar-charged display that’s 36% larger than previous fēnix models. And it’s tested to U.S. military standards.PacePro Technology: A first-of-its-kind PacePro feature helps keep you on pace with grade-adjusted guidance as you run a course.TOPO and Ski Maps: Use topographical maps for North America to navigate your adventures and view run names and difficulty ratings for 2,000 worldwide ski resorts.Power Manager: View how various settings and sensors impact your watch’s battery life, so you can make battery-extending changes on the fly.'


RESULT:

Stay charged up and ready for any adventure with Solar Power! With fēnix 6X Pro Solar, you can go as far as you want with no limits! This watch is equipped with a 1.4” Power Glass™ lens that uses sunlight to give you a free energy boost and extend your battery life for those off-grid adventures. Not only that, but the Dynamic PacePro™ feature helps you run smarter over all types of terrain, and preloaded ski maps cover more than 2,000 resorts around the world. Plus, it features a wrist-based heart rate¹ and Pulse Ox² sensors to give you insight into your fitness activities and you can even sync your favorite streaming services and listen to music without your phone! Even better, it has a rugged yet sophisticated design that includes a 1.4” solar-charged display that’s 36% larger than previous fēnix models, and it’s tested to U.S. military standards. The PacePro Technology feature helps you stay on pace and keep track of your progress, while the TOPO and Ski Maps allow you to navigate your adventures and view run names and difficulty ratings. And, the Power Manager helps you view how various settings and sensors affect your battery life and make the necessary changes on the fly. With fēnix 6X Pro Solar, you'll stay charged and ready for any adventure!